Little kids running around everywhere
The raging hot sun approaching down on my back
As I step all over the pretty lilacs
My feet get damp from the morning dew,
The icky things stuck to my feet like glue
People are jumping in their pools
Jumping and diving in like fools
I love everything about summer
When it’s over, its going to be a bummer <3
Dear Rene!
ReplyDeleteI like the description that you put in your poem and I think that all of the rhymes flow well too. However, if you want to make this for a photo story you should make it longer or add a second poem