Reflection

I thought my story wasn’t the best it could’ve been. When we began writing stories, I had no clue to write about so I just started writing about the first thing that came to my mind and I went on from there. My whole story went really fast and wasn’t very original. I could’ve made the plot a little better too by adding more facts and more details so the story wouldn’t be too rushed. Also, I thought that I should have included more background info as to why she got so mad that her boyfriend was talking to another girl and how her and Ashley became friends. I thought my beginning was a strong start, but as it got to the middle and towards the end, it went downhill from there.
After reading everyone’s comments, I think I am going to add more details on Bobby and their relationship. I am also going to fix the end of my story because it seems too real and I think it needs a twist to it. I might also take out the part where Ashley says that she doesn’t want to talk to Bobby because it seems like I am portraying Ashley as a bad friend, which is what I don’t want to do. I will also describe her friendship with Ashley a little more as well. Another thing is that I’m going to explain why she doesn’t like Vanessa and what happened between them. My story has a lot of editing, adding and revising to do.